Add the first paragraph and the changes to the last sentence that were discussed.

CVS version numbers

english/blends/index.wml: 1.24 -> 1.25

1 files changed, 14 insertions, 4 deletions

diff --git a/english/blends/index.wml b/english/blends/index.wml
index 2bfccd2e2d0..1ac518ca7e2 100644
--- a/english/blends/index.wml
+++ b/english/blends/index.wml
@@ -1,13 +1,23 @@
 #use wml::debian::template title="Debian Pure Blends" BARETITLE="true"
 
-<p>Debian Pure Blends are a solution for groups of people with specific needs.
+<p>
+A general purpose operating system like Debian can be the perfect solution for
+many different areas of life.
+Whether you want Debian to work for you in the classroom, as a games machine,
+or in the office, each area has its own unique needs and requires a
+different subset of packages tailored in a different way.
+</p>
+
+<p>
+Debian Pure Blends are a solution for groups of people with specific needs.
 Not only do they provide handy collections (meta-packages) of specific packages,
 but they also ease installation and configuration for the intended purpose.
 They cover the interests of different groups of people, who might be children,
 scientists, gamers, lawyers, medical staff, visually impaired people, etc.
-Their common goal is to make installation and administration of computers
-for their target audience as easy as possible and to connect their audience
-with the people who write or package software for that audience.</p>
+Their common goal is to simplify installation and administration of
+computers for their target audience, and to connect that audience
+with the people writing or packaging the software they use.
+</p>
 
 <p>You can read more about Debian Pure Blends in the <a
 href="http://blends.debian.org/blends/">Pure Blends Manual</a>.</p>