Make sentences more user-oriented and shorten links explanation [ agreed with Ben Armstrong ]

CVS version numbers

english/CD/live/index.wml: 1.4 -> 1.5 
french/CD/live/index.wml: 1.2 -> 1.3

1 files changed, 15 insertions, 15 deletions

diff --git a/english/CD/live/index.wml b/english/CD/live/index.wml
index 23e1bdf07e0..377ae776ac8 100644
--- a/english/CD/live/index.wml
+++ b/english/CD/live/index.wml
@@ -4,8 +4,8 @@
 #include "$(ENGLISHDIR)/releases/images.data"
 
 <p>A <q>live install</q> image contains a Debian system that can boot without
-modifying any files on the hard drive and also contains the Debian Installer
-enhanced by a module that can install the contents of the image.
+modifying any files on the hard drive and also allows installation of Debian
+from the contents of the image.
 </p>
 
 <p><strong>Is a live image suitable for me?</strong> Here are some things
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ rescue and standard. Many users will find these initial package selections
 suitable, installing any additional packages they need from the network
 afterwards.
 <li><b>Architecture:</b> Only images for the two most popular architectures,
-i386 and amd64, are currently provided.
+32-bit PC (i386) and 64-bit PC (amd64), are currently provided.
 <li><b>Size:</b> Each image is much smaller than the full set of CD/DVD images,
 but larger than the network install media. If you are installing from optical
 media, the standard and rescue images will fit on a CD, whereas the others
@@ -49,36 +49,36 @@ packages and then install it from the same media.</p>
 
 <div class="line">
 <div class="item col50">
-<p><strong>Live install CD/DVD/USB image (via torrent)</strong></p>
-<p>The following links point to "hybrid" ISO image files suitable for writing
+<p><strong>CD/DVD/USB (via <a href="$(HOME)/CD/torrent-cd">BitTorrent</a>)</strong></p>
+<p><q>Hybrid</q> ISO image files suitable for writing
 to DVD-R(W) or CD-R(W) media, depending on size, and also USB keys of the
-appropriate size. If you can use torrents, please do, as it reduces the load on
+appropriate size. If you can use BitTorrent, please do, as it reduces the load on
 our servers.</p>
 	  <stable-live-install-bt-cd-images />
 </div>
 
 <div class="item col50 lastcol">
-<p><strong>Live install USB-HDD image</strong></p>
-<p>The following links point to image files suitable for writing to USB keys of
+<p><strong>USB-HDD</strong></p>
+<p>Image files suitable for writing to USB keys of
 the appropriate size. This format is offered in case the BIOS of your system
-cannot handle booting "hybrid" ISO images from USB keys.</p>
+cannot handle booting <q>hybrid</q> ISO images from USB keys.</p>
           <stable-live-install-usb-hdd-images />
 </div>
 </div>
 
 <div class="line">
 <div class="item col50">
-<p><strong>Live install CD/DVD/USB image</strong></p>
-<p>The following links point to "hybrid" ISO image files suitable for writing
+<p><strong>CD/DVD/USB</strong></p>
+<p><q>Hybrid</q> ISO image files suitable for writing
 to DVD-R(W) or CD-R(W) media, depending on size, and also USB keys of the
-appropriate size:</p>
+appropriate size.</p>
 	  <stable-live-install-iso-cd-images />
 </div>
 
 <div class="item col50 lastcol">
-<p><strong>Live install netboot image</strong></p>
-<p>The following links point to image files suitable for booting from a <a
-href="$(HOME)/distrib/netinst#netboot">Network boot</a> server:</p>
+<p><strong>netboot</strong></p>
+<p>Image files suitable for booting from a <a
+href="$(HOME)/distrib/netinst#netboot">Network boot</a> server.</p>
 	  <stable-live-install-net-images />
 </div>
 </div>