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authorCalum McConnell <calumlikesapplepie@gmail.com>2020-12-17 17:36:13 -0500
committerSteve McIntyre <steve@einval.com>2020-12-18 12:13:44 +0000
commit56deea60bd607ef7578a8d63c8d2cb723df62491 (patch)
treea1c3b69927ebdb90e0b226ec03c5f98f50163e81
parent32221908650f246a25a44011d27ddb4edfd0df84 (diff)
[ENGLISH] Improve some english phrases
-rw-r--r--english/index.def6
-rw-r--r--english/index.wml8
2 files changed, 7 insertions, 7 deletions
diff --git a/english/index.def b/english/index.def
index b7f902b67ca..98b2fae245a 100644
--- a/english/index.def
+++ b/english/index.def
@@ -30,14 +30,14 @@
</define-tag>
<define-tag SwissKnifeTitle whitespace=delete>
-<gettext domain="homepage">Debian is like a Swiss Knife</gettext>
+<gettext domain="homepage">Debian is like a Swiss Army Knife</gettext>
</define-tag>
<define-tag SwissKnifeAlt whitespace=delete>
-<gettext domain="homepage">Debian is like a Swiss Knife</gettext>
+<gettext domain="homepage">Debian is like a Swiss Army Knife</gettext>
</define-tag>
<define-tag PeopleTitle whitespace=delete>
-<gettext domain="homepage">People have fun</gettext>
+<gettext domain="homepage">People have fun with Debian</gettext>
</define-tag>
<define-tag PeopleAlt whitespace=delete>
<gettext domain="homepage">Debian people at Debconf18 in Hsinchu really having fun</gettext>
diff --git a/english/index.wml b/english/index.wml
index f9f6726e3d8..dc67024ff26 100644
--- a/english/index.wml
+++ b/english/index.wml
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
</div>
<div class="styled-href-blue column-4-parts">
<h2><a href="intro/people">People</a></h2>
- <p>Who we are, what we do</p>
+ <p>Who we are and what we do</p>
</div>
</div>
<div class="row">
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@
</div>
<div class="styled-href-blue column-4-parts">
<h2><a href="intro/philosophy">Our Philosophy</a></h2>
- <p>Why we do it and how we do it</p>
+ <p>Why we and how we do it</p>
</div>
</div>
<div class="row">
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@
</div>
<div class="styled-href-blue column-4-parts">
<h2><a href="devel/join/">Get Involved, Contribute</a></h2>
- <p>You can be part of this!</p>
+ <p>How you can join us!</p>
</div>
</div>
<div class="row">
@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@
</div>
<div class="styled-href-blue column-4-parts">
<h2><a href="intro/why_debian">Why Debian</a></h2>
- <p>What makes Debian special so you should use it</p>
+ <p>What makes Debian special</p>
</div>
</div>
<div class="row">

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