From 1b62dcf348569f7b3d0975c674a776e714dc31fc Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Paul Wise <pabs>
Date: Thu, 24 May 2018 06:25:41 +0000
Subject: Changes related to the re-ordering.

A new heading is needed for the split-out criteria.

A comment is needed to refer to the split-out criteria.

"In addition" needs to be moved to the second paragraph.

"a number of" needs to be removed to improve the grammar of the second paragraph.

CVS version numbers

english/derivatives/index.wml: 1.15 -> 1.16
---
 english/derivatives/index.wml | 7 +++++--
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

(limited to 'english/derivatives')

diff --git a/english/derivatives/index.wml b/english/derivatives/index.wml
index 7a83a06e104..d16e9838568 100644
--- a/english/derivatives/index.wml
+++ b/english/derivatives/index.wml
@@ -23,10 +23,11 @@ so that everyone can benefit from their improvements.
 <h2 id="list">Which derivatives are available?</h2>
 
 <p>
-In addition, we would like to highlight the following Debian derivatives:
+We would like to highlight the following Debian derivatives:
 </p>
 
 ## Please keep this list sorted alphabetically
+## Please only add derivatives that meet the criteria below
 <ul>
     <li>
       <a href="https://grml.org/">Grml</a>:
@@ -57,7 +58,7 @@ In addition, we would like to highlight the following Debian derivatives:
 </ul>
 
 <p>
-There are a number of distributions based on Debian listed in the
+In addition, distributions based on Debian are listed in the
 <a href="https://wiki.debian.org/Derivatives/Census">Debian derivatives census</a>
 as well as in <a href="https://wiki.debian.org/Derivatives#Lists">other places</a>.
 </p>
@@ -91,6 +92,8 @@ improve Debian for our existing audience and
 make Debian suitable for a more diverse audience.
 </p>
 
+<h2>Which derivatives will Debian highlight?</h2>
+
 ## Examples of these criteria are in the accompanying README.txt
 <p>
 The derivatives highlighted above have each met most of these criteria:
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