overfienized

CVS version numbers

english/News/weekly/1999/23/index.wml: 1.1 -> 1.2

1 files changed, 11 insertions, 10 deletions

diff --git a/english/News/weekly/1999/23/index.wml b/english/News/weekly/1999/23/index.wml
index 7ab7887d2c6..1fecc7dd91e 100644
--- a/english/News/weekly/1999/23/index.wml
+++ b/english/News/weekly/1999/23/index.wml
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ community.
 <p>
 <b>The logo results are in</b>: The 
 <a href="http://www.debian.org/vote/1999/raul-0.gif">Swirl logo</a> is the
-winner. It's first appearance: gracing a rather nice 
+winner. Its first appearance: gracing a rather nice 
 <a href="http://themes.org/banners/debian_banner.gif">banner ad</a> at the
 top of <a href="http://www.themes.org/">themes.org</a>. Even a
 <a href="http://wm.themes.org/minithemes.cgi?search=debian">Window Maker
@@ -32,15 +32,16 @@ that fixes a remote shell hole.
 </p>
 
 <p>
-<b>SPI is now an official US non-profit organization.</b> Donations to SPI are
-now <a href="mail#2">tax-deductible</a>.
+<b>SPI is now an official US non-profit organization.</b> Among other things,
+this means that Donations to SPI are now  <a href="mail#2">tax-deductible</a>
+for US taxpayers.
 </p>
 
 <p>
 With the latest version of dpkg (1.4.1.3) to hit the archive, it's
 finally possible to <b>list fixed bugs in the changelog and have them
 automatically closed by dinstall</b>. No more mailing bugs.debian.org
-directly..
+directly...
 </p>
 
 <p>
@@ -52,8 +53,8 @@ the modifications and get 50 Euro.
 </p>
 
 <p>
-Mozilla M6 has been debianized. This is particularly good news on the
-debian-alpha platform, which has a fairly well working graphical web browser
+Mozilla M6 has been Debianized. This is particularly good news on the
+Debian/Alpha platform, which now has a fairly well working graphical web browser
 for the <a href="../../../../Lists-Archives/debian-alpha-9906/msg00043.html">
 first time</a>.
 </p>
@@ -80,7 +81,7 @@ Quite a few opportunities to meet fellow Debianites are coming up:
 <ul>
 <li>
 A Debian BOF has been <a href="mail#4">organized</a> at Usenix. 
-It's this Thursday at 7.
+It's this Thursday at 7pm.
 <li>
 On June 15th, the <a href="http://www.balug.org/">Bay Area Linux User's
 Group</a> will hold a <b>Benefit Dinner for Debian</b>. Linus Torvalds is the
@@ -90,8 +91,8 @@ There will also be a sizable number of developers present.
 <li>
 There will be a 
 <a  href="../../../../Lists-Archives/debian-devel-9906/msg00053.html">gathering
-of developers</a> including the Project Leader during the Paris Linux Expo on
-the 17th or 18th.
+of developers</a> including the Project Leader, Wichert Akkerman, during the
+Paris Linux Expo on the 17th or 18th.
 </ul>
 </p>
 
@@ -128,7 +129,7 @@ Thanks to Katsura S. Yoshio and Christian Meder for
 Closing with a personal note -- DWN is late this week and will probably be
 late next week because I'm moving. The good news is that <b>VA Linux Systems
 has hired me and Sean Perry to work on Debian full time</b>, 
-<a href=""../../../../Lists-Archives/debian-devel-9906/msg00557.html">details
+<a href="../../../../Lists-Archives/debian-devel-9906/msg00557.html">details
 here</a>.
 </p>